Chapter 26....

Well Ann was very smart and wrote a letter to Mr.Loomis and told him to meet her somewhere. I'm so glad she didn't leave without telling him that she had the suit. The cool thing is is that he actual did not kill her like he did Edward. Like I thought she left to go look for other people. I wish her good luck and maybe we will here from her again. Now we have to wait because its the end of this adventure story.

Chapter 25.....

Well Ann did steel the suit with I think was not right even though she wanted to go find more people. I do think that there were more people in the world. I hope she does find them but it wont say if she does or not because the next chapter is the last. Well I feel sorry for the guy because if he wants to travel her cant with out dying.

Chapter 24.....

I cant believe Ann is going to steel the safe suit. What if Mr.Loomis catches her and kills her?. for her to survive she has to sneak out at night she will die from starvation or Mr.Loomis will kill her. I cant believe her dog died and she did not even care!. That dog kept her company and she just leaves it like the dog meant nothing.This was a very sad chapter

Chapter 23...

Well Mr.Loomis shot Ann!. I feel so bad for her she is most likely in allot of pain. I still dint get why he would do that its so cruel. Mr.Loomis is still getting faro to get her sent and lead him to where she is staying. What an immature freak!. I cant stand Mr.Loomis he thinks he the new king of the world. Oh my gosh Ann killed her dog! that's so mean.

Chapter 22.....

At the bagging of this chapter it makes her seem like an animal. But I'm very proud of her for doing her work. Well its also good that he can walk again,I guess. I really do want them to become friends again it would be way easier and cause them less grief. It probably will not happen though because what Mr.Loomis did to her was very cruel. I do understand where Ann is coming from though.

Chapter 21.....

Ann and Mr.Loomis did work something out and now Ann goes down every morning feeds the animals and milks the cow. Poor Ann she doesn't get to bake cakes anymore because she doesn't have the oven that must be very disappointing to her.Mr.Loomis still has Faro(Ann's dog)I think that Ann should have her dog back. Well at least Ann is very mature and did not choose to pick a fight Mr.Loomis that's good.

Chapter 20.....

Well Mr.Loomis sent the dog to go tracking for Ann. It was to risky so she decided to go down there herself and talk to him but what would she say?. I feel very sorry for Ann and if I was her I would not of gone back to the house. I hope that the dog is OK though because that would be really upsetting if Mr.Loomis had killed the dog. I knew That something like this would happen. I mean like it would be that good of a book if it was about her taking care of Mr.Loomis and then he recovers then they live all fine and happy.

Chapter 19......

Well now Ann is living in the cave. Mr.Lommis tied up her dog and her dog was whining!poor thing. Ann knows that she will eventually have to go down there and work things out with Mr.Loomis. If she doesn't then she will starve and her dog will die that would not be to good. Well theres not much for me to say in this journal.

Chapter 18.....

Oh know, Mr.Loomis tried to Rape her!. She finally got away though before he could do anything to her. I understand why he would try to have sex with her though its because there the only people left in the world. So he wants to start the relm again and I geuss he had a feeling that she would not want to so he pinned her down. However I do think that it was very mean and desturbing. Hes way older then her thats just way more then gross!.

Chapter 17.....

Well Mr.Loomis is making Ann feel very uncomfortable. He wanted her to read to him when he can read himself and he wasn't even paying any attention the the story. I f I was her I would tell him that he I making me feel uncomfortable and that he needs to change his attitude. I don't know weather or not to believe that Mr.Loomis is a good guy. Then again he just might be a little flirtatious because he hasn't been able to talk to a woman for a while.

Chapter 16....

Mr.Loomis can move but can not lift his seat he sat out on the back porch all morning!. How can someone just sit down and do nothing all morning that's like impossible. Ann just Finlay realizes that she barley know Mr.Loomis the things she does know she learned from the nightmares that he had. Well um...Ann asked Mr.Loomis if he had ever gotten married and he took it the wrong way and grabbed her hand in between his hands and said no. I would have freaked out if that happened to me that's why I'm glad I'm not in her shoes.

Chapter 15......

Ya! Mr.Loomis has learned to walk a little more. Now he has decided that when he can walk like a normal civilian he will go the the ogdentown library to get some scientist books. He doesn't seem to interested in the books that Ann want though witch I think is very mean and when he goes there he should get a couple for her. Well the thing is ,is that the books will be radioactive and they would have to wait a few moths depending on the size of the book. That must suck though having to walk more then twenty miles just to get a few books that you will not be able to read for a few months.

Chapter 14....

Mr.Loomis has recovered and on Ann's birthday Fancy that!. Mr.Loomis is still having a few problems though he cant walk and his still very weak. In this chapter you can tell that he is really thankful to Ann for taking care of him like this and not just leave him to die. Mr.Loomis could talk but only a little and Ann new that if he talked he would probably loose some breath or energy and he needed that. I am so glad that he is feeling better though.

Chapter 13....

Well the good thing about this chapter is that Mr.Loomis is feeling allot better. Though he still sleeps allot!because he is not fully recovered from his sickness.
Poor Ann,it says here in this chapter that she wanted to be a teacher but she cant now she cant be anything I feel for her. Now Ann wants to go to Ogdentown and get some more books but she needs Mr.Loomis's safe suit. Ann knows that Mr.Loomis killed his old friend edward when he wanted the safe suit now she is scared to ask. I think she should go for it and ask him to use it after all she did for him I think he should let her.

Chapter 12...

Poor Ann!. Shes doing everything she know to make him better but he keeps getting worse and worse. Mr. Loomis's lips had turned puffy and gray! that's so gross. I would hate to be Ann Burden. The book is getting better but also getting more dramatic. Ann is praying for Mr.Loomis hoping that it will help I think it will though. You never know unless you try.

Chapter 11....

Mr.Loomis is feeling alot worse his temperature is 106 degrees. Mr.Loomis's dreams are getting out of hand he keeps thinking that his enemie Edward is trying to steel his suit. I am starting to get a little worried becuase he might do somthing stupid. When people are really sick things happen to them that you can never imagine. This must be pretty hard on Ann because she has to take care of him and one day things just might get a little out of hand. This book is getting very dramatic and interesting.

Chapter 10,,,,,

Oh know!!!! Mr.Loomis has gotten worse!. Mr. Loomis's sickness is makeing him crazy,he thought his old friend edward was in the house when he really wasnt. Ann is getting very worried she doesnt think that he will make it. I dont really think that he will niether. It would be very upseting if he died. Ann would probally blame herself for his death.

Chapter 9...

Well it looks like Mr.Loomis is feeling a little better. I really liked the two sentences that is called a poem"oh earth,unhappy planet born to die,Might I or your confessor be...." Well His temperature came up to 104 degrees. Its a possibility that he will die. Well Ann has fauth that he will make it so I geuss I do to.

Chapter 8....

What if this man(Mr.Loomis) is a mean guy and trys to do something to her?. Well Ann is treating her guest(Mr.Loomis) with respect. I cant believe he hasn't gotten any better. Its a good possibility that he will not make it and that Ann will be alone. I cant believe he decided to go fishing with his tempurater though thats so stupid!.

Chapter 7....

Oh my god,The mans temperature is 99.5!. What if the girl(Ann) cant make him feel better?. I hope he doesnt die,if he does then she will be for sure the last person on the planet. She(Ann) has never look after anyone this sick before so she has know clue what she is doing!. Lets just hope that she's doing the right thing and that he will feel better soon.

Chapter 6....

Wow this book is getting a little weird. I think the man was stupid to go swimming in that water. I mean its just common sence,especaily if youur a scientist like he is. What if he becomes sick and dies!. That would not be good at all because then she would be the only one in the world. I hope that the man does survive.

Chapter 5...

I think that scientists would really like this book. Once you get farther in the book you wont regret reading it. I think the author did a good job writeing it. I personally do not like it,but that doesnt mean that other people wont like it. I do wonder if they decide to start the human relm again. However I do want to know how he hasnt died.

Chapter 4...

Wow,I cant believe that she has found a person. Not just any person but a man, that means that they can start the relm again!. I think its kind of wierd though,because shes to scared to go see him. What if hes an old man!,that would not be to cool. Personlay i think that she should go down their wand get to know him. Or else she will be alone for the rest of her life.

Chapter 3...

The book is getting a little more interesting I guess. Ann has found out that there is someone else in the world and he is at her house,Fancy that!. He set a tent out and hes wearing a very weird suit bye the sounds of it. Would he die from the radioactivity?. The man went swimming in a pond that supposedly is not safe to be swimming in. He cant die from that can he?.

Chapter 1...

This chapter is kind of boring because all it talks about is her family. Witch bye the way isn't that interesting maybe the book will get better I hope so. Maybe she isn't the only person in the world!. Maybe there is someone out there,but she just doesn't know it and may never know it. Its kind of freaky once you think about it though because I mean being the only person on the earth man!. That would be so freaking boring.

Chapter 2...

This chaper is a little better then the first one. I think she was very smart to ration out food. And be aware of her surroundings If i was in her place, I would have died by now. Also, I dont think i would have stayed there. I would have went searching for survivours.